![]() For myself, the tonal dissonance between what I do know of their religious beliefs and punishments for transgressions, versus the way you’ve written this thing out is too jarring. Then if the daughter went through the same there would be better legal recourse, and what you’ve proceeded with WOULD be more believable with proper suspension intact. It would be a different thing if you had them start in that area and then within like the first two months move to the United States, or even Canada. I am saying, that’s what they believe religiously, and are raised to uphold to a great degree. ![]() The rest seems like you want to ignore the actual punishments those girls who go through that would still have to face at home and in their society at large.ĭo note: I am not saying it’s right. By and large within the confines of the realism you’re applying to the tale, their culture does NOT work that way. The daughter would NOT have been given the choice about it. Fuck the idea of “individuality” and self espression, hell since he is not her blood father it would have been his way or the highway for both of the women in that house. ![]() This should have taken months the daughter should have been either offered to her rapist as wife to save face, or more properly married quickly off just in case. Because of how harsh the negative consequence will be. In this specific context you actually need to do both of them. Corruption does not work as a mechanic if you’re not going to A) make it a very, very slow burn with no jarring “and then X happens that might as well be a totaled car wreck you can’t avoid” OR B) make the corruption apply in the context of the religion you are choosing to work within. Because she grew up there and would know drilled into her head from before the time she even started to bleed, that could happen. She would doubly have been protective of herself to the point of never going near someone that could twin for an actual troll to be raped in the first place. The daughter may have been allowed to attend college, certainly but you can bet her own family would have beat her senseless for what happened. Whether you agree with them or not, you have to play by THEIR rules. The problem when you approach a fantasy corruption from the point of view of a different cultural background is that you CANNOT take it with the openness and inclusive mindset of the Western Culture. Barko says “Going for a look at corruption, from an Islamic background” you have to be aware that under their laws (commonly but not always sharia law) and their religion, both of those women if not all of them would be locked down to one man and probably stoned or worse for almost any hint of adultery. The reason this lost any interest from me was straight from the point the daughter was raped.
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